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Emo poem for "nice" people by ~Kaissie613:iconKaissie613:



How deep fear runs, I know

The length of dark, I feel

The pain of good intentions, I recognize

The love of others, I need

The strength that is you, I crave

Understanding is something I would die for

I live hidden, this face shown is not my own

The dark consumes the true me as others good intentions cut too deep
©2006-2009 ~Kaissie613
:iconkaissie613:

Author's Comments

First Submission. I found this in my writings, shared with loved ones, updated slightly and posted. I hope you like it.

Even happy people have bad days. I wrote this at a moment where I felt alone amongst people. Sometimes it is hard to accept how things are and that there is nothing I can do to change them.

Comments


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:iconmonalullaby:
I like. Nice work.
:iconkaissie613:
Thank you. I really appreciate it. <3

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"Smother me in chocolate and throw me to the dieters!" -Stolen from my Knight.
:iconspiritual-chaos:
Wooo, very nice! : D

Are you going to submit your other stories and poems here, too?

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:heart: Taylor
:iconkaissie613:
Thank you! I really appreciate it.

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"Smother me in chocolate and throw me to the dieters!" -Stolen from my Knight.
:iconkaissie613:
Awww.. Thanks sweetie!

Yes, I will. I promise.

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"Smother me in chocolate and throw me to the dieters!" -Stolen from my Knight.
:icongabycat:
very deep. I have felt what you wrote many times. This went right to my heart. :heart:
:hug:

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"If the Muse arrives late for work, you begin without them." Peter S. Beagle
:iconkaissie613:
Gosh, thank you so much!

It was a very bad moment in my life. I prefer to be happy.

I am really glad you liked it!

Thanks sweetie!

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"Smother me in chocolate and throw me to the dieters!" -Stolen from my Knight.
:iconjneli:
I liked it too! Direct, it cuts like a knife through the walls we tend to put up.

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J.neli
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:iconkaissie613:
Thank you so much!

I am always really happy when my friends like my work. Seriously! I am going to have a big smile all day now!!

Walls are funny things huh? I hope I never have to feel the way I did that day again. It was awful. But, I am thankful to have an outlet to express it.

Thank you again for sharing with me!

Have a wonderful day my very good friend!

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"Smother me in chocolate and throw me to the dieters!" -Stolen from my Knight.

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